CyberPunk Heavy Machine Gun: High Poly - Looking For Crit and Advice

Marcus_Martinez_3D · Sep 2020

This is my WIP high poly for a Cyberpunk style machine gun. I'm currently working on the grip area but I welcome crit for any part of the project. This model is going to be baked down to a normal map.

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teodar23 · Sep 2020

Looks interesting but here are some issues.
Red - gap
Yellow - basic shape intersection
Green - too low poly
Blue - normal issues

Marcus_Martinez_3D · Sep 2020

Here's an update, I left most of the normal issues pointed out as I'm most likely going to change the topology of these spots to be a little more interesting or at least make them easier to clean up. This includes the box magazine and grip area, which I have circled in blue.

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Marcus_Martinez_3D · Oct 2020

Bit of a jump here, I landed on this texture pass a couple of weeks ago before starting on a new piece. Any advice on what I can do to get this texture to a good spot?

I'm working on this in substance painter and rendering in Marmoset toolbag.

CyberPunk Heavy Machine Gun: High Poly - Looking For Crit and Advice

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