Box Jump - looking for critique please

kojo

Hi everyone,

Here is my latest animation.  I would love to receive any feedback in order to continue my progress!

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/c3c9ee5ac4dc/

Thanks!

Kojo

adam crockett

Added some comments. 

kojo

Hi Adam, thanks for the feedback!  I'll take it on board and try to have an updated shot uploaded sometime soon.