Batman Armory - Need Feedback

Raithel

Hey, i am making a scene and I really need someone elses feedback. Because i am working on this scene for some time and i think i lose my objectivity about this scene. I hope you can help me

JamesBrisnehan

Well it's hard to critique the props themselves. In the image you linked to, they feel kind of distant from the camera, and when I zoom-in, they're kind of blurry. So I'll talk about the scene as a whole.

The weapons and gadgets are clearly the focus of the scene, but their silhouettes are getting lost in the very similar color of the display case. Maybe a different color of display case, or even an emissive display case would help make them pop. (If there is one thing Superheros know how to do, it's dramatically display and light their gear.)


The metal panels to the sides take up a lot of space in the shot, but they are a little bland. They could use more material definition and thought put into the design. Right now, I'm not sure what their purpose is, what all of the seams and bolts are for, or what kind of material they are made of. Or if you want to, you could furnish the edges and background of your scene with more interesting Bat Cave stuff, like computers, scaffolding, stalactites, and/or guano.

Also, where is the can of Shark Repellent Bat Spray?

JamesBrisnehan

P.S. you can upload your images directly to Polycount in your comments. No need to re-rout people to a sketchy image host site full of click-bait ads.

Raithel

Thank you so much for your feedback. Thats exactly what i needed. I will upload another shot for the gadgets. I deleted the metal wall parts from my scene, i added those because of my friends suggestions I am adding a cabinet for batman's costume. I am adding a screenshot which i took from my viewport. The quality isn't great but i think you can see what i am trying to make like you suggested Right know, i dont know if i should keep a space between the top of my cabinet and the belt or add something. Any suggestions for it?

JamesBrisnehan

You could put the Bat-Gauntlets and the Bat-Breastplate in that empty space (or are the Bat-Gauntlets already on the bottom shelf? At first I thought they were the Bat-Boots, but I'm not sure).
Also you're having a similar problem here with the silhouette of the props getting lost in the background. More back-light and/or a different color for the cabinet interior would help.