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Osmann
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Hello everyone, I am showing you my work. For the first time I presented myself as a concept artist.
Please evaluate and give advice on future achievements! 
(My artstation link: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/aY0NG2)

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  • Kanni3d
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    Kanni3d ngon master
    Super cool design, and great modeling/textures! I feel a big inspiration/reminiscence of DOOM's arachnotron :grin:

  • Osmann
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    Osmann polycounter lvl 3
    Kanni3d said:
    Super cool design, and great modeling/textures! I feel a big inspiration/reminiscence of DOOM's arachnotron :grin:


    Thank you, very glad
  • CheeseOnToast
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    CheeseOnToast greentooth
    Model and design are good but I think that the textures are too noisy overall. Have some flatter/simpler areas of texture to provide some visual resting points.

    Your current lighting setup is flattening the image as well. Try a simple 3 light combo - fill light (usually skybox, HDRI image with exposure tweaks), a rim light and a key light.
  • Osmann
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    Osmann polycounter lvl 3
    Model and design are good but I think that the textures are too noisy overall. Have some flatter/simpler areas of texture to provide some visual resting points.

    Your current lighting setup is flattening the image as well. Try a simple 3 light combo - fill light (usually skybox, HDRI image with exposure tweaks), a rim light and a key light.
    Thanks a lot for the advice, I'll try to do it!
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