I first implemented my concept

Osmann

Hello everyone, I am showing you my work. For the first time I presented myself as a concept artist.
Please evaluate and give advice on future achievements! 
(My artstation link: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/aY0NG2)

Kanni3d

Super cool design, and great modeling/textures! I feel a big inspiration/reminiscence of DOOM's arachnotron

Osmann

Kanni3d said:

Super cool design, and great modeling/textures! I feel a big inspiration/reminiscence of DOOM's arachnotron

Thank you, very glad

CheeseOnToast

Model and design are good but I think that the textures are too noisy overall. Have some flatter/simpler areas of texture to provide some visual resting points.

Your current lighting setup is flattening the image as well. Try a simple 3 light combo - fill light (usually skybox, HDRI image with exposure tweaks), a rim light and a key light.

Osmann

CheeseOnToast said:

Model and design are good but I think that the textures are too noisy overall. Have some flatter/simpler areas of texture to provide some visual resting points.

Your current lighting setup is flattening the image as well. Try a simple 3 light combo - fill light (usually skybox, HDRI image with exposure tweaks), a rim light and a key light.

Thanks a lot for the advice, I'll try to do it!