Would love feedback on the walk cycle

MoonLightL

hello everyone, 
I would love feedback on this walk cycle of a game animation. See what I can do to improve it. I might be missing something. 
https://youtu.be/khiHG_GM6sE

SeekeroflLight

I think there is some room for improvement as at the moment it is stiff. I think adding a bit more sway in the shoulders and some movement in the spine would help. Check out a video clip of someone walking holding a rifle in that position, even doing the motion yourself to feel the movement will help. I hope that helps, keep at it.

lluc21

If you post this on the right category you will probably get more people to help you. https://polycount.com/categories/animation-showcase-critiques 

MoonLightL

SeekeroflLight said:

I think there is some room for improvement as at the moment it is stiff. I think adding a bit more sway in the shoulders and some movement in the spine would help. Check out a video clip of someone walking holding a rifle in that position, even doing the motion yourself to feel the movement will help. I hope that helps, keep at it.

Okay, thank you. 

MoonLightL

lluc21 said:

If you post this on the right category you will probably get more people to help you. https://polycount.com/categories/animation-showcase-critiques 

Alright, will give that a shot. Thank you.