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Debriefing Chair

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Hi Polycounters!

I would like to show you my latest project - Debriefing Chair. Based on amazing concept from Fred Augis (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/EQwlA). C&C are more than welcome.

For better quality shots check out my artstation site: 
https://www.artstation.com/mateuszburnetko










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  • Ashervisalis
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    Ashervisalis grand marshal polycounter
    Hey, looks dope! I feel there are a lot of details missing in your model that were in the design. Generally, I feel you could have made certain parts thicker or bulkier. The mouth cover should look really impending and big, but yours looks like they could still speak around it. There are a few places where Ive marked where you're missing detail, but there are a lot of places which I haven't marked as well. I also feel you should take a run at the leather seat cushions, as the reference make it look super worn out, like lots of people have struggled in it, and damaged in it, but your leather looks kind of like an old chair.

  • Boosted24v
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    Boosted24v polygon
    Thats on heck of a debriefing, lmao
  • vaasmontenegro
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    vaasmontenegro polycounter lvl 8
    Hi @Ashervisalis,

    Thanks a lot for your comment and for pointing out imperfections :) it's very accurate. There's a room for improvement in the next project and I will definitely pay more attention to detail next time.

    Greetings :)

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