Feedback plz

abrynildsen

I'm dipping my toes into the huge ocean that is stylized sculpting. 
I've made my first sculpt, and would love some general feedback and pointers! 

Ashervisalis

Cute backpack! I suggest raising the mouth of the pack up to meet the overhanging piece. Also, the straps should be way thicker. Something like those two rings, you could wonk them a bit and make one side of the ring twice as thick as the opposite side. One corner of the sleeping mat could be sticking up to improve the silhouette. Those buttons on the top of the shoulder straps could be bigger and more visible. The mouth's edge of the backpack needs some work, it could do with flattening to match the overhanging piece. I'd also suggest giving the hanging belt-like piece a bit of a curve so it sticks out a little when viewing from the side.

abrynildsen

@Ashervisalis Thanks! This is exactly the type of feedback I was hoping for. Gonna jump back in and try to make the changes.