Portfolio feedback
Hello everyone,
My portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/user-ab621255001f805f
I'd like to have a feedback on it.
I'm currently looking for work and i'm curious if this kind of level is enough to get me into any decent studio?
How much time would I have if I needed to do this kind of work in a studio?
What do i need to improve the most based on my current works?
And lastly, should i keep doing same kind of props in terms of size or do i need to create completed scenes, but spending much more time on them?
Thank you!
My portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/user-ab621255001f805f
I'd like to have a feedback on it.
I'm currently looking for work and i'm curious if this kind of level is enough to get me into any decent studio?
How much time would I have if I needed to do this kind of work in a studio?
What do i need to improve the most based on my current works?
And lastly, should i keep doing same kind of props in terms of size or do i need to create completed scenes, but spending much more time on them?
Thank you!
Replies
- I like the carriage but I'd like it even more if you made it into a little diorama. Like have some dirt or puddles around it.
- I think the thing that stands out most to me is not having enough color vibrancy in your textures. Everything is towards the muted side. Again with the carriage you could have some baskets with fruit or potions or something that would give it a little more pop and to further indicate what the carriage is used for.
- I think making props that could be included into a bigger scene is your next way to go. The car in the forest is interesting but it's not entirely clear why it's there. Just little story elements to take it to the next level.
Just my 2 cents though. Keep it up!