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One-Eyed Tony

Finally finished a project that took what felt like months to complete! I learned so much from this one, and I can't wait to dive into whatever my next project will be! :) 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3oyNn2

 Thanks for looking! :)



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  • OutlawHue
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    OutlawHue polycounter lvl 8
    Congratulations on completing the project and that is good you are learning from it. 
    Now, this project should be kept around and maybe comeback to it and redo it with everything you will learn about character creation (maybe a year or so).

     So the anatomy needs some work (specifically, his nose has a very sharp crease on the side)
     Use anatomy references for this.

     His hair doesn't seem to match his past actions.....meaning he looks like he did some serious brutal actions....I would imagine his hair would be at least a little messy.

     The blood splatters look like a quick afterthought and need some time to look right. This is the same for the scars. 
     Once again references will be needed.

    Clothing needs more work....looks like it's just getting to the part you detail it and make it look real.

     Your textures need to be redone. I think the UVs may not be done well enough. You can see this in the shirt texture.

     Why is the belt lowpoly over everything else? Or maybe the mapping isn't good

     The skin bump work is okay in the front part of his face but the sides seem to be "tiled" wrong

     So once again congrats finsihing....keep learning and revisit
  • kianacreates
    Thanks for the criticism! I may come back to it in the future after I learn more! :) 
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