right of the bat, what I think could make the scene above better, is do some height, color and density variation on the grass. Right now its all the same height, color and density. I think all the vegetation as a whole could use some more love. The pink flowers and the moss behind I, look like they were all moved with a big brush. Over all add a bit more variation to all your vegetation.
I agree with Jose your assets could use some material definition, variation in the grass etc.
Also your composition is a little awkward the near side grass is touching the the border of the image and the entire scene is off center, and seemingly with a little bit of a dutch angle. I would play and think about the composition a bit more.
I'd make the lighting a little bit more dramatic as well.
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Tree is looking nice, I would add more leaves
Also your composition is a little awkward the near side grass is touching the the border of the image and the entire scene is off center, and seemingly with a little bit of a dutch angle. I would play and think about the composition a bit more.
I'd make the lighting a little bit more dramatic as well.