Fire Lookout Tower Environment Critique

ChrisLane

Hello, This is my first post to Polycount so sorry I have done anything wrong.

I finished this project a little while ago and was looking for some critique to help push me to the next steps in my art journey. The inspiration was from Firewatch. The narrative of this scene is about a man and his dog returning to the same lookout tower every year so it is almost like a second home.

My portfolio link is here where there will be more screenshots but I will show the main ones here. 

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Oy4LJJ

Thank you for any feedback you give

teodar23

first ting that sticks out is the AO - maybe tone it down. if you're baking the lighting, just remove the AO. if not try increasing the radius.

small issues here and there but looks good overall.

teodar23

first ting that sticks out is the AO - maybe tone it down. if you're baking the lighting, just remove the AO. if not try increasing the radius.

small issues here and there but looks good overall.