Desert Motel Scene - Feedback Welcomed

Javier3D · Feb 2020

Hi everyone,

I wanted to create a scene to show my work done in a 1954 chevy truck, with a more cinematic style and telling a story.

The render was created in Marmoset, the models in Maya and the textures in Substance Painter. The sky and postproduction in Photoshop.

In the second image I added a cinematic effect changing the shades and the light in Photoshop. Even so it seems to me that it is missing more lighting and details. I would like your opinion.

I don't know if the character is still very dark, as is the background (mountains and palm trees).

I think I should add the light path of the parking lanterns in the background.

Feedback/ critique is welcomed!

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