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pascalie
pascalie
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pascalie polycounter lvl 2
hi guys 
please i need you feedback on this shot
i am i step Tangent curve
 thank for support

https://youtu.be/cPOU54Qlzac

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  • tyree1
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    tyree1 polycounter lvl 2
    it has a lot of stretch personally I think is always good and its certainly smooth. but consider adding more poses during the long stretch
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  • brucemoose
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    brucemoose polycounter lvl 3
    You have lots of great poses and fluid motions  - maybe try doing a motion pass with just a polygon ball and try and get some more natural timing because it feels a little sticky with the timing. Make sure the polygon ball is animated to camera.

    This type of planning approach then apply the curves to your cog blocking



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