Arisaka Type-38 Rifle - C&C Much Appreciated

StarWyvern · Feb 2020

Hello,

I recently finished my game ready Arisaka Type-38 rifle and would like to know if this is portfolio ready?

Here is the Artstation link: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Z58zzG

Attached are some sample images and the main reference I have been following.

Thanks!

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icegodofhungary · Feb 2020

The bottom image is the reference, correct? I think the variations in the metal is more apparent on the reference image. The wood looks spot-on though.

Zi0 · Feb 2020

Like mentioned above, the metal parts could use a bit more work, separate the materials more. Presentation could be improved as well, take a look at some other bolt action rifles on artstation to get inspired.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/W29ykX
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Oygezk
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rRJ0wG
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/1ngeJL

StarWyvern · Feb 2020

Thank you both very much for your comments!

I edited the metal to help break up the materials a bit more. Is this looking better or does it still need more work?

As for the presentation, I followed the 4 links that were provided plus this one that has been a source of inspiration: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Kagw6G

I plan on doing a wireframe view and a breakdown soon, but wanted to get these views out of the way first.

Thanks!

Arisaka Type-38 Rifle - C&C Much Appreciated

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