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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2WC69lxWS4 Here is an animation I did for class. Any thoughts or suggestions?

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  • BrandonBerryCG
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    BrandonBerryCG polycounter lvl 6
    Around 0:14 the "realization vfx" comes after the face has already reacted. I would move the effect slightly before the face turns into a smile.
    At 0:30 i feel like he should pop out behind  the crystal slightly sooner, if he is traveling the same speed as when he went behind it. 
    at 0:36 he appears to move with burst of speed, however the background environment does not indicate this. I would speed up the camera a bit there. 

    Hope it helps. 
  • svrart
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    svrart node
    Nice.  The story is also interesting. 
    Suggestion - improve the walk, run cycles.
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