Gymnastics Shot

AGoodFella

Hey guys, been polishing this shot up, wondering if there is anything else I can do. I still need to animate the camera. Trying to get it to a demo reel standard. Any crits are much appreciated!

https://syncsketch.com/playground/b5d7890c01a34a6890058f6c21653b08#/

tyree1

the only part that is not dynamic is when he dismounts when in air and turns around. everything after that is good

AGoodFella

Yeah, there were some momentum issues with that dismount but I'm working on it. Thanks!

AGoodFella

Did a pass on the dismount at the end and added some camera animation. Wanted to keep the camera subtle so it doesn't distract from the anim too much.

https://syncsketch.com/playground/0fd0ea64aa79422680acbb5e793e0b34#1317190/1350812

Thinking of calling this done for now unless there's anything major that sticks out.

Thanks!

tyree1

I do not think the camera motion was needed. the motion should be strong with or without the camera. the extra motion to the character is better than what you had. but it seems like you just got tired. I will try to do a quick version from when the character leaves the pole

tyree1

I did this in 45 minutes straight stopped for hour and a half. then another 30 minutes. more lively in the air.

drawn bar
https://youtu.be/4PWKl7Xi9X8

AGoodFella

hahaha, I admire your consistency in posting work. I still can't figure you out.