Forest shaman (zbrush learning)

xyzzilla

Hi folks, i'm new here, and i would like to recieve any comments, advices and critiques about my last work. I'm doing 3D stuff for 3 years, but game art is pretty new for me. I want to work in game industry, and now i'm learning about it. I'll be glad to get advises about where i need to move on, what sides should to improve.

This is my work - forest shaman - i did it with zbrush, max, maya, substance painter and unreal.

Also on artstation - https://www.artstation.com/xyzzilla

gene6ix

hi, thanks for critiquing my work.  for you post, your characters form needs more work, more details, i get it's stylize but you still need more details in the forms, clothes 

xyzzilla

gene6ix said:

hi, thanks for critiquing my work.  for you post, your characters form needs more work, more details, i get it's stylize but you still need more details in the forms, clothes 

i will work on it, thanks

carvuliero

I think cropping the image will improve it a lot. For example he is looking to left so give him some space to look at get rid of the dead space to the right and make character sit on bottom 1/3 division of the image .Also adding some vignette will help frame the image

If you make the character's feet actually touch the ground that will help to integrate him into environment same with his hand and staff 

xyzzilla

carvuliero. thanks. i will work on composition. And yeah, he is soar a bit now