Portfolio review.

deedoubleyou

Hey guys,
I finally have my portfolio to a level where I think I have a chance at landing my first job. I have been having no luck as of yet but im sure it will happen eventually. Any advice, or anything you think is missing from my portfolio would be appreciated, cheers. 

https://www.artstation.com/dee-double-you

Ashervisalis

I think the sculpting on Troy's pants is looking a little noisy, and his hair sculpt isn't really too impressive.

Aapo's texturing looks like it could use a lot of work. The tendons that lead to his toes also go really far up his foot and look unnatural. His loin cloth looks a bit noisy as well.

Troy is the only face you can see in your portfolio, and he is a bit stylized, so I'd wonder if you could sculpt faces in other styles.

I'm not a character artist, but these are my first thoughts. Good luck!