2D Illustrations, Need critique, thank you!

Simjim · Nov 2019

Hello!

I'm a UI/UX artist, and on free time I'm making 2D illustrations. Here are my last 3 works. Which might have same errors occurring in all of them, for all I know ^^ Yes, I know, all of them are kinda similar in a theme : < But that's just kinda happened.

I'm looking to improve on anything and everything, really. Any feedback is appreciated

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Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/74/ms08aeh7ahxg.png

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/wd/o2papoearq5t.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lv/ixpkt1htqwgg.jpg

Eric Chadwick · Nov 2019

Hey these are great!

I think it might help you to spend more time on thumbnail studies, silhouettes and composition and value studies. No color, just quick studies of composition, how to move the viewer's eye.
http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/Concept_Fundamentals#Composition

Right now your characters are looking a bit flat, their values are a bit same-ey. Like in the last piece there, her knees and arms are the same brightness as her face. Which is the most important? Right now the viewer's eyes bounce all around.

Simjim · Nov 2019

Thank you, Eric Chadwick, I'll try your advise!

I think I know what you mean about her color values.

2D Illustrations, Need critique, thank you!

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