need feedback/critics
I started doing animation less than a month ago and this is my second animation of all time. There are many mistakes, but this is the best I can do at the moment. I know that feedback / criticism is very important in animation, so I would like to receive any help. thank
https://vk.com/video-170680435_456239020
https://vk.com/video-170680435_456239019
https://vk.com/video-170680435_456239020
https://vk.com/video-170680435_456239019