Stuart Improvement thread

Bunkcopic

Hey, I decided to create this to try and document my progression of 3d art skills but also maybe get some feedback from all you pros!  

I started this grenade concepted by Ben Mauro, I personally find it hard learning by myself and don't see much improvement but hopefully uploading here will help me see progression  

Here's the high poly for the grenade, Want to get the low poly on the go asap.

 any feedback is appreciated as always ! 

  

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Another grenade 

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trying to get the max/ chamfer modifier/polish in zbrush workflow down.  

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Bunkcopic

This is turning more into a uni blog. Any feedback always welcome !  

Going to add a bit of character and put some cloth around the wood, maybe some pain on the metal along with a bit of a dent on it. Need to stop juggling so many projects and just get one finished then move onto the other

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Feedback for this would be great ! Any opinions .

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enough for today, got uni submissions due

edit> concepted a new direction for the piece

JamesBrisnehan

It all looks pretty cool. The beveled edges are really nice. I'm looking forward to seeing them filly textured and lit.

Bunkcopic

slowly coming together ?  

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the cloth is feeling a bit ugly atm. Would you maybe just be better off using doing the folds in painter?

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Edit

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wip transformers

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submission due for the 10th will i finish??  

roughed this head out today, 

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no i  did not finish learnt a great deal though Got some great help and critical advice from Drew Robertson. The head of cg at axis Glasgow. He was kind enough to give me a few huge pointers! Thanks Drew