Need Critiques About Scene Layout & Composition.



I am making a corner of a room. A Study Corner to be precise.
My teacher said the 1st layout looked like a closet and she thought I was more like a room than a corner of a room. 
So I went home and changed the 1st layout into the 2nd layout (with longer wall and floor and include a roof) 

What do you think? which one is better? what can I improve here in terms of layout and composition?

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