Lytari

Shanck

Just finished my first character sculpt.
Would love to get some opinions.
More renders at https://www.artstation.com/artwork/N5m0vN

vavavoom

Good effort for first character sculpt.

I think the eye iris' are a little too close together maybe. Try making the eyes a little smaller and separating them ever so slightly, I think it may help~~

nice job. 

CybranM

I think the model is suffering from anime-eye syndrome. I'm not sure how "realistic" you want the model to be but as it is now it looks a bit too exaggerated imho

Shanck

CybranM said:

I think the model is suffering from anime-eye syndrome. I'm not sure how "realistic" you want the model to be but as it is now it looks a bit too exaggerated imho

vavavoom said:

Good effort for first character sculpt.

I think the eye iris' are a little too close together maybe. Try making the eyes a little smaller and separating them ever so slightly, I think it may help~~

nice job. 

Thanks for the feedback.
I used https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZPp-ERfDNw as reference
But I'll try to pay more attention to the eyes for my next sculpt