Capone's Candies - 1930's Candyshop - Feedback
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Hello all! Recently I've been working on this scene with feedback in a CGMA course with Clinton Crumpler.
I plan on making additional tweaks and potentially expanding the scene (just a little). Would love to hear any thoughts.
Will post this to artstation when I'm ready to put this down.
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Bit of an update-
I've addressed some feedback from elsewhere. In this image I'm tackling a couple ideas: breaking up the wall paper, adding molding near the floor, and changing the spacing between the floorboards.
I think the molding, while it matches molding elsewhere in the scene, might be a bit too subtle. Thus far I'm really happy with the second wallpaper I've added to the room.
I've also updated the cash register to have interact-able keys and associated counter. There are other props I've added to the room to fill out the space a bit as well.
Here are updated shots:
I started updating the candy jars in these shots, but there seems to be a bit of a rendering issue. I plan to tackle that, and continue addressing some previous feedback.
If you have any thoughts please let me know!
I was using a generator that wouldn't let me get the boards any closer, so I reworked something from scratch. I'm a lot happier with the latest result:
More updated shots of this one in action:
I've started to add more props, and also tweaked the trim on the walls to be a touch darker. I'll keep updating as I continue.
1.) Floor material - shadowing created an odd "column" effect, this is gone.
2.) Candy models, substances & variety added.
I will likely move on to do an outdoor section for the entrance of this shop, any feedback here will still be valuable though.