I don't really think there's much to say about your painting probably because it's fairly simple, but I think it's looking nice. What do you want from your critique and what are your other thoughts on it, so people can have an easier time to comment.
First of all thanks Zaulta for the feedback. I'm not the greatest character designer per se because I've been practicing art fundamentals and just recently started studying costumes. How is the design? Is the noise too distracting? Can the design be implemented in video games? Can there be more story telling features or less?
For a second I thought Matsuura joined polycount, so good recreation on the style! Can't give much critique though, maybe your linework could use some more variety, with more bolder and thinner lines.
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