PAM (Styliced Character Real Time)

sbstndc · Jul 29 2019

hello everyone, this is my first time here!. greetings, all feedbacks are welcome!.

Here my last art work.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/baYNKg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/oi/q6l01vi33d2z.gif

PolyHertz · Jul 29 2019

I'd definitely recommend adding some secondary motion to the characters idle animation. The cloth coming down from her waist and her hair shouldn't be in sync with the rest of her body like that.

sbstndc · Jul 29 2019

thanks for your feedback!!!

Nuclear Angel · Jul 30 2019

I personally am not a big fan of her Pose. Having her knees and feet facing inwards gives her an awkward and weak pose that looks insecure.

jose.fuentes · Aug 2 2019

to me, the wrist on screen right seems un natural, it seems like its resting on an invisible surface, and I agree with PolyHertz, adding some secondary motion will def help

PAM (Styliced Character Real Time)

hello everyone, this is my first time here!. greetings, all feedbacks are welcome!.

Here my last art work.

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