PAM (Styliced Character Real Time)

sbstndc

hello everyone,  this is my first time here!. greetings, all feedbacks are welcome!.

Here my last art work.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/baYNKg

PolyHertz

I'd definitely recommend adding some secondary motion to the characters idle animation. The cloth coming down from her waist and her hair shouldn't be in sync with the rest of her body like that.

sbstndc

thanks for your feedback!!!

Nuclear Angel

I personally am not a big fan of her Pose. Having her knees and feet facing inwards gives her an awkward and weak pose that looks insecure. 

jose.fuentes

to me, the wrist on screen right seems un natural, it seems like its resting on an invisible surface, and I agree with PolyHertz, adding some secondary motion will def help 

sbstndc

Thank you all for the comments, they have helped me. I sincerely believe that doing the rigg and idle is not my thing, for the next one I will ask a partner.