Hey Juan, nice work! I like your storyboards, lots of life and energy in them. I feel your more rendered work lacks some of the clarity that your more looser sketches have, but it shows you've put a lot of time and effort into them!
To critique your latest work, for me it's not clear exactly what's going on.
Is the guy being burned by the sun, or is he being burned by the guy in the chair with magic or something? What are these floating things? What function do they serve? They look way too heavy to float on their own so is there a power source/engine/gravity field? Even fantasy elements should be grounded in reality if the viewer is going to suspend their disbelief.
Don't just think about making a cool image, also think about the story and ideas you're trying to convey with your image and make sure that's your priority. Use lighting, composition, textures, etc to emphasize and illustrate to the audience what's happening.
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Here some storyboard frames.
Inspired by James Lavelock text.
"The robots will tolerate us because we will be useful to them."
To critique your latest work, for me it's not clear exactly what's going on.
Is the guy being burned by the sun, or is he being burned by the guy in the chair with magic or something? What are these floating things? What function do they serve? They look way too heavy to float on their own so is there a power source/engine/gravity field? Even fantasy elements should be grounded in reality if the viewer is going to suspend their disbelief.
Don't just think about making a cool image, also think about the story and ideas you're trying to convey with your image and make sure that's your priority. Use lighting, composition, textures, etc to emphasize and illustrate to the audience what's happening.
Hope this helps, and hope to see more!
DART Company
Year 2017
Digital Shoguns Company
Year 2017