Eldar Warlock

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Hey everyone,

I'm getting towards the end stages of this project. An Eldar warlock based off a concept by Ted Beargeon 

I've been going back and forth between marmoset and substance adjusting my textures. I didn't realise how much of a difference the lighting would make so there's been lots of tweaking. 

Any feedback would be really appreciated, especially if anyone has advice on the textures and lighting.
Cheers!











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  • momomoonscar
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    Hey, this is looking pretty good! My only thing in terms of lighting is I feel as a whole the whole image is a little too flat. I feel if hes a warlock the shadows should be a little darker and the overall lights should be colder and more dramatic! Maybe a stronger rim light too to cut through the darker shadows. 

    On an unrelated note, I feel like when you look at him up close he isnt really imposing/scary. His ear I find a little goofy tbh, and his face is too round and healthy looking in my opinion. As always take everything with a grain of salt :)
  • Brian "Panda" Choi
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    Face proportions could stand to be longer.  Right now, I don't buy this is an Eldar's face given how close the eyes are to the nose.

    What are the layers you got working on the white parts of the armor?
  • Soufflé
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    @momomoonscar
    thanks for the feedback! totally agree with the feedback, i'm gonna go in and tweak some lighting so it pops a bit more and see if I can adjust the proportions of the ear :) 

    @Brian "Panda" Choi
    Spot on with the feedback man, the face could definitely stand to be longer so it has more of an elven look. For the armour it's got a base layer of worn metal and a chipped paint layer on top that i'm blending between. Really appreciate the feedback! :) 
  • Soufflé
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    Spent today messing around with lighting and presentation and decided to call this fella done, been staring at him for way too long. Got him up on artstation now. =)  https://www.artstation.com/artwork/A95635


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