LowPoly // Alien On Adventure Feedback (new on polycount)

mitchy

Hello wonderful people,

im just join poly count and I have no glue how it works here but I guess I just post my Artwork and hope I get some feedback?

If im wrong pls tell me or tell me how I have or can post my Artwork! (:

So I model a little crazy alien, is looking for new pieces of decoration. On a visit to Earth, he finds a great Cactus which is taken directly. Will he sting on the spikes?

My idea was to put an environment in a glass. I liked the idea to make something crazy, So I created a desert landscape. After many types of vessels, I decided on a rocket (glass → lava lamp → rocket). So that the work remains consistent I have added an alien which should give the project a slight crazy note.

The whole project is in a nice LowPoly styled. About feedback or criticism, I would be very happy. (:

Check the model out from my Sketchfab page if you want to zoom in.

Low Poly Alien On Adventure by Michelle Schmidt on Sketchfab

lpfeffer

Hello! I'm new here too, but i think you're doing it right so far I like the bright vibrant colors on the first one, but the second image looks too dark and grainy. Maybe some more dramatic lighting could help: Less sunlight, but instead light from underneath the alien? Could make for some dramatic shadows. What do you mean by putting in in a glass? Like a fish bowl?

mitchy

Hey, thank you for your comment!

The second picture showed just a closeup from the alien with a transparent background (that's why its dark). But thank you for the hint!

I mean, I like the idea from a snow globe - like putting a landscape or a scene into jar.
Instead of just creating a scene, why not wrap them nicely to present it.

lpfeffer

Sounds like a plan! When you want to go for a snowball-like thing, maybe add some small cubes as particles flying around?

mitchy

Thats a nice idea! I try to go for a more realistic style in my next project. Will be interesting for me, I love Low Poly but I guess its time for something different!