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Hi polycount, it was my first huge work, I still go on to study but result is fine? hope you like it
Full Project https://www.artstation.com/artwork/A9vwEo
Soft: Cinema 4d, Moi 3D, Octane Render, After Effects


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  • 3DKlassen
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    3DKlassen polycounter lvl 4
    Hi there, Over all I like it but I have some mixed emotions.

    The body lines of car, cargo boxes, front grille, and headlights are too perfect for being a ruffed up old vehicle. Something that is generally tagged up would be beaten and dented in at least a few sports.
    Right now it almost looks like a perfect vehicle with a vinyl wrap making it pretend its old and beaten.
    I would like to see something wrong with, broken, or replaced in one of the headlights, Some of the cross beams in the front grille broken or dented, the chrome front bars to be dented and scuffed up.

    I like the direction this is going but I feel like there needs to be more damage for this design to be consistent. Keep up the hard work!
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