"Why So Serious" Animation critique

OverlordChaos

I'm doing an animation using the dialogue of the famous Heath Ledger as the Joker in the Dark Knight. So I would l appreciate any useful critiques on how to make this animation as great as the dialogue.

OverlordChaos

OverlordChaos

This is the blockout of the male character saying the line to the female character. Any helpful critiques would be appreciated.

Synsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/358e089767f6/#892995/819610