Props showreel feedback

Ross93

Hello people! I am creating two small props to be included in my showreel, I have just graduated and would love to receive your feedback and criticism in order to improve my work and understand where my mistakes are. These are my first 2 projects, an old Sony radio and a ww2 german crusher cup. I didn't aim for an exact replica but for the overall look.

Sony Radio Reference


3D model render


Turntable

WW2 German Crusher cap Reference


3D Render


Turntable


Thank you!

Ashervisalis

They look really cool. I'd say the frequency labeling on the radio should be made brighter/more readable. It would also be cool to see wireframes. The props are really well done though

Ross93

Ashervisalis said:

They look really cool. I'd say the frequency labeling on the radio should be made brighter/more readable. It would also be cool to see wireframes. The props are really well done though

Thank you for your feedback! I'll post the wireframes!

CybranM

The textures look great but I'm wondering why you chose to omit some details? On the hat for example the seam at the front is missing and the wreath around the red dot is missing. The radio is missing some text under the SONY logo and the dial is just flat.
You seem to have the whole grunge maps and grime thing down, the materials "feel" real and believable, except for maybe the dust and finger marks on the cap on the hat which seems a bit odd.

Great stuff over all