Take another pass on your center of gravity's curves. It appears to ease into positions where it shouldn't and has some weird rotations. If you can upload to sync sketch We could paint over it to give you some visual feedback.
Alright I left some more feedback. I'd focus more of your time on mapping out the physical arcs and body mechanics on this shot. It feels like you have beats you want to hit and you're letting that drive the animation and not the body mechanics itself. There is some great posing in there though. Are you animating from reference?
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Thank you for your feedback! Yes, I am, unfortunately I cannot load my reference clip on the site.