Looking for some constructive critique

CGSimon

Hi,

I'm new here so I'm not sure if I should make a new topic or look deeper for some general one about what I'm going to write. I've started getting into 3d art quite a few years ago (around 3d studio max 5),after few years of totally forgetting about the topic,j just in last couple of years I 've started to thinking about turning it into career. I appreciate if you guys would write some critique about my last two works. I know there is a lot to learn ahead.

Here are the links:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/oOyVyL

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/GXgJa4

Fell free to check out my other works aswell

CybranM

Do you want to be a character artist or work with hardsurfaces? Being a character artist is one of the hardest jobs to land since the competition is fierce. Its best to focus on a specific type of 3d modelling, if you want to be a character artist you have a lot or work ahead of you.

If youre trying to get a job in 3d I'd suggest removing everything except the car and the balsam from your artstation as they're very amateurish. Everyone needs to learn but it doesnt help you land a job to show your weaker pieces.
The car is nice, the lighting and rendering especially, the base mesh could use improvement but its a solid start.
If you designed and rendered the commercial products, balsam, pamphlet etc, then thats definitely your strongest scene, it looks great.

If you pick a role you want to pursue and keep going I think you wont have much trouble

TheGabmeister

As previously mentioned, it might be a good idea to tell us your ultimate goal as an artist so that we have a point of reference on how to critique your work.