The scene looks pretty cool! I love the materials and the unsaturated colour of it all. The pillar, which I've circled in blue, looks a bit soft and undetailed compared to everything around it. Also, (and I could be wrong about this) but I'm not sure this arch design would work. The legs of the arch would extend all the way to the ground instead of just stopping where they are in your picture. Did you work off a reference for the arch?
The composition of the scene look's really interesting, good job!
The scene looks pretty cool! I love the materials and the unsaturated colour of it all. The pillar, which I've circled in blue, looks a bit soft and undetailed compared to everything around it. Also, (and I could be wrong about this) but I'm not sure this arch design would work. The legs of the arch would extend all the way to the ground instead of just stopping where they are in your picture. Did you work off a reference for the arch?
The composition of the scene look's really interesting, good job!
Hi and thanks for the feedback! I completetly agree with the column, making it one big piece was a mistake in hindsight. Taking a similar approach to the pillars on the building to the right would have been a lot better, detail wise.
The arches I actually had reference for, when I find time I can dig up the actual photo, but it was something along the lines of this
It would probably benefit the composition to continue the pillar down on at least one side though either way.
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The composition of the scene look's really interesting, good job!
I completetly agree with the column, making it one big piece was a mistake in hindsight. Taking a similar approach to the pillars on the building to the right would have been a lot better, detail wise.
The arches I actually had reference for, when I find time I can dig up the actual photo, but it was something along the lines of this
It would probably benefit the composition to continue the pillar down on at least one side though either way.
Thanks again for your time!