Character Concept: Completely Honest Feedback Wanted

tylerlongnecker · May 2019

Hey Everyone,

Here is a character concept I have been working on. Here is my OC Daemon, a street thug in a future cyber punk city. The initial idea is to have him be a guy who grew up on the streets and survived after a series of unfortunate events including having to get robotic legs to replace his own. Let me know what you guys think.

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ARMADUS · May 2019

Hi there,
Great start. I'd say if you can work on the anatomy to fit abit more with perspective. I'd also make the line work thinner.

tylerlongnecker · May 2019

Thanks for the feedback. I think you are right about the anatomy and perspective. Those are two of my weaknesses and I'm working to get better at that. Do you have any suggestions or advice on how to improve that?

Character Concept: Completely Honest Feedback Wanted

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