Evelyn 3D Game Character

Tsukari

Hey guys! i am a begginer 3D artist and i decided that i wanted to try to make my first game character to get a feel on what it is like, and for this i`m using this amazing concept made by UNSOMNUS https://www.artstation.com/artwork/DxNkPA


I made the body from skratch, i tried to be a bit more realistic than the concept and because of that i still don`t know if the end result will be satisfactory. Please give me your thoughts and feedback

Tsukari

Some progress that i have made so far

universe

Hi,

She looks nice, but if I were you I wouldn't rush with her clothes because the body seems to be very far from the concept. I think she lost a lot of her sexual appeal which is very important in this concept. Her body is quite rough, head is too small for me and overall proportions and curves are different. Some of my thoughts:

Tsukari

Thanks for the feedback Universe! I made some changes with what you said! This is the model so far, i will play more with her legs...

universe

Looks much better! I understand that she is going to be in a different style than the reference but I think that you still have a lot of places to improve her overall appeal. Check those articles:

https://bonytobombshell.com/bombshell-aesthetics-building-attractive-female-body-imaginable/ 

https://www.peacequarters.com/8-things-men-secretly-find-attractive-in-women/

Waist to Hip Ratio

"Curvy women catch the eye of male onlookers for a multitude of reasons. Subconsciously, voluptuous women awaken the animal instincts all men have deep in their psyche to reproduce. Don’t worry too much about those diets ladies because child-bearing hips are always in with the guys!"

 

I'll try to help you with some feedback when I have some more time.

Sj1

Looks hot. Face in concept is a bit fatter in the cheeks and shorter in length, which makes her cuter... imo.