[WIP : Need Feedback] Skater Girl

Notink

Hi all ^^

I need some advice for my next character. I will later do the retopology on 3D Coat but for now I am sculpting the main body. I will do the accessories and the skateboard on 3ds Max when I'm sure the proportions are correct.

Thanks in advance for your feedback !

Notink

A small update with the beginning of the retopology.

Notink

The skateboard so far :

robzxy94

what is your reference for this character  ? 

Notink

Frankly speaking, I don't have any. Most of the time I am working on instinct on Zbrush. I only use a moodboard and feedbacks of people around me ^^'

ChiNguyen

Just 2 things stood out to me.

Her lower leg seems a bit too long. Maybe lower her knees by a smidge might improve the leg anatomy.

Her arms might be a little short.

Other than those two I think you're doing a pretty good job with the rest.

waruta

I think you need to move the neck/head forward to be more in line with the shoulders. I would also push in the top of the chest and add more curve to the lower back.

Notink

Thanks a lot for your feedback ! I will try to improve all of this during this week-end ^^