The shapes and materials feel like the right direction for me, at the moment it doesn't feel like the whole piece has enough POP if you get what i mean its feels very toned down and subtle despite the more of a bold concept.
I thing adding some tattoos or maybe sci-fi implants on the girl would be good idea. alternatively you can make the the background to be more interesting and at the point to character may pop off from there. Also a really simply one if just make jacket more detailed. Just some thoughts. Cool piece so far
actually i did this piece from this concept .. so i felt not changing it too much in order to tribute the original artist.. what your thoughts on that? should i change it and add my own stuff on it or some what stick to the concept? thank you for your feedback
Well looking at the concept the difference is that that jacket looks like its feathers(or maybe fur) a top the jacket, and those little accessories like the necklace and the chocker also add to the overall feel of the piece but i will not comment on things that I am unsure if you will still add.
for the necklace and the choker i actually modeled them, but forgot to render, for the fur on top the jacket, honestly i couldn't find a solution to create it while preserving the silhouette of the concept, if you have any tips or tuts, i appreciate so much, thanks again
This is my latest piece (Red).. C&C are welcome.... I left it long time ago and came back recently to finish it... I know i should complete the ( Mask) project first but i kinda wanted a fresh eye on before i move to the next stage.. you can visit my artstation for more details and clay renders https://www.artstation.com/hellscream21
hey guys this is a likeness Study that I'm doing ,i'm looking for help here .. my eyes are all washed out and i
can't see any differences .. any kind of help regarding likeness subject
matter or anything in general is much appreciated before i take it any
further.. thank you
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I thing adding some tattoos or maybe sci-fi implants on the girl would be good idea. alternatively you can make the the background to be more interesting and at the point to character may pop off from there. Also a really simply one if just make jacket more detailed. Just some thoughts. Cool piece so far
The mask is on point though
https://www.artstation.com/hellscream21
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hey guys this is a likeness Study that I'm doing ,i'm looking for help here .. my eyes are all washed out and i can't see any differences .. any kind of help regarding likeness subject matter or anything in general is much appreciated before i take it any further.. thank you