Hope, the Survivor

UchiLT

I've learnt a lot with this character and I'm happy to post my first 2019 model! 


For more images visit : https://www.artstation.com/artwork/k4eJmn
C&C always welcomed!

Brian "Panda" Choi

Decent results!

Skin tones are too monotone. I don't see the colorzones of the face and body.

Eye scar looks too fresh and saturated to be a scar.

Eye doesn't need to have its own texture sheet.

Hair needs a unified vertex normal.

Cape lacks an obvious normal detail expressing what sort of fabric it is.

UchiLT

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Decent results!

Skin tones are too monotone. I don't see the colorzones of the face and body.

Eye scar looks too fresh and saturated to be a scar.

Eye doesn't need to have its own texture sheet.

Hair needs a unified vertex normal.

Cape lacks an obvious normal detail expressing what sort of fabric it is.

1-I found difficult to paint this kind of pale tone you might be totally right
2- Hmm I liked the way it looked,but yeah I suppose that to be a scar, blood should be dry
3- I asked on a forum and was told that it was a common practice to place eyeballs in its own uv sheet so you can reuse them
4- Was my first time doing hair cards and tbh I dont really know what you mean by that or how its done 
5- Yeah didnt think about giving it normal microdetail,its true

By the way I really appreciate your work in this community. I always see you are helping people and I'm pretty sure you have commented in almost every post I made in order to help. Just wanted to say thanks!