Lipsync Practice

Nakedwooki

I am working on blocking out a dialogue shot and feel like it is not really working. Any critique or advice would be greatly appreciated. Here is the link to the syncsketch:
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/a4a919a6a3a3/

Nakedwooki

I received a bunch of feedback from a different forum and updated this shot a fair bit. It is still in blocking so any feedback would be appreciated.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVRuTv69OVU
Here is the Syncsketch link: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/a4a919a6a3a3/