camping girl [nsfw]

BittaSingh · Mar 2019

Hello polycounters , this is a project on which i am working . please give me some critiques and feedback on it . Also here is my artstation link - www.artstation.com/bitta_singh
please check out my work and i would really appreciate if you guys follow me on artstation .

BittaSingh · Mar 2019

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Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/98/1yfsc3gwv5y8.jpg

made some changes .

Eleszar1 · Mar 2019

good work but the niples on the t-shirt makes me cringe a litle too obvious good work

braintrain · Mar 2019

good work! to me the torso seems a little elongated, considering the strong lean backwards

jacopoS · Mar 2019

Nice gesture!
I get the feeling that her rib cage is a bit too enlongated. Idealy, if she was standing straight, the distance between her chin and the height of her nipples should be about one head. Obviously you can account for gravity and make that a little bit lower. But, as a general guide line, I would avoid going much lower than that.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/5x/2p7uxr51chzf.jpg

If I were you, I would also dig her armpits a bit more. You can basicly just dig inbetween the pec and the latissimus dorsi and get closer to the rib cage in that area.

Maybe the lower legs are in need of some tweaking as well. I suggest you provide a front view to make sure.

Also I agree with @Eleszar1 the nipples could use some subtlety.

Really nice job overall though!

BittaSingh · Mar 2019

@Eleszar1 @braintrain @jacopoS Thank you for your feedback i will work on all of the tips you gave me . really , thanks a lot for your feedback .

BittaSingh · Mar 2019

Here is the front side and back views . i tweaked her breasts a little and will work on torso and legs .

camping girl [nsfw]

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