Manufacturing Plant - Critique appreciated

anaroeto

Hi everyone!

I want to share a couple of renders in Marmoset Toolbag of a little environment I created. It's my first render with this tool, adding lights and fog. I'll appreciate any critique for improve the results. If you need more information, please, ask me, it's my first post in Polycount.

Thanks all of you!

Jack M.

Scale seems kind of off throughout. I think the width of the hallway could be narrowed by over half and that would help things a lot. I would also look into replacing a lot of your textures. They don't seem to be pbr and they're not really recognizable in many cases. For example I can't tell what the ground is made of.

Hope that helps. Keep iterating and it'll get better.

anaroeto

Jack M. said:

Scale seems kind of off throughout. I think the width of the hallway could be narrowed by over half and that would help things a lot. I would also look into replacing a lot of your textures. They don't seem to be pbr and they're not really recognizable in many cases. For example I can't tell what the ground is made of.

Hope that helps. Keep iterating and it'll get better.

Thanks for your time! I'll try to apply your advices and show the result again