Hello Everyone!
It has been a while since I made a thread on here. But I decided to be more active in 2019! So for my first Environment in 2019 I decided to do a smaller scene, a Comic Book Shop set in the 1980's. I know its a bit far ahead but I am also adding a small Progress Gif of from when I started it.
I hope your 2019 is going well so far!
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@Ashervisalis For now I'm going to try to re-create old comics from the 1980's, or if need be create some from scratch though I don't have the best illustration skills lol
Looking forward for your updates on the scene!
A small Zenith Cube Color TV!
And a TEC MA 230 Cash Register!
Slowly replacing more assets and starting to texture out most of the Assets I've made already.
I'd suggest just having one cash register? 2 registers in a store that small seems a bit excessive, and I feel downsizing to one would give it more of a quaint comic store feel.
Here is another update, took some more time to texture some things and add more to the countertop, I also took out the second register. Did passes on the Telephone, VCR, VCR Casettes and a few other things, still tweaking around with the lighting, let me know what you think on it, would love some feedback on my lighting so far!
I did add the pinboard from before. The plan is to have two boards, one for Ads and community stuff and One for the Business itself. Things are coming along pretty well so far!
Also added some tweaks to the lighting, added volumetric lighting to enhance the mood. Let me know what you think!
I feel like content wise I'm close to finish adding in new assets and also doing a big pass on the comic books with the different covers, placement, etc. But all the feedback has been a big help so far!
LUT preview from Photoshop
A quick LUT test for the scene.
If your making this as a portfolio piece, once your done, you could recycle a lot of it and tweak it and make an old record shop using a lot of the same assets
Though I do think it looks a little bit too perfect. Maybe adding some stains may help bring a little bit more personality to the place (not ridiculous stains, just a little bit of dirt and dust here and there).
Here is another pass, I posted on twitter about asking for some tips and critiques and got a lot of good responses. Firstly I adjusted the lighting and added more volumetrics to the atmosphere. I also added a couple more assets to the scene. Including the Backpack with a tiny patch of everyone's favorite Greentooth
I also made an adjustment to how the scene handles my fog, I made a Volumetric Fog Particle system, that way it could be contained within the shop and not spill out to the outside.
Let me know what you guys think!
Ill most likely post some breakdowns some time later.
Here is a Link to my Artstation Post (Gif + Video):https://artstn.co/p/k4mR0K
Looks great man. Would love to see the comics in the stands to not all be so perfectly upright, but that's a minor crit. Kudos on finishing!
Also @Eric Chadwick I did put a Greentooth lol
Very subtle Patch on the backpack!