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Trying to making some stuff. Any feedback\critique\advice is welcomed. 
Original concept by Mateusz Dąbrowski

High poly:

Low poly 248 Tris\126 Verts:

Low poly with normal map:


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  • Sanches
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    Sanches polycounter lvl 8
    Moving to next one. Concept by Mateusz Dąbrowski

    Sort of blockout:

  • Ashervisalis
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    Hey! These will look cool when finished. I think you've made your bevels on your first box too large. You're also missing key features, such as the box being made out of one mesh, and not being able to be opened. In the concept art, there is a view of the box open, and it would be cool as hell if your box could open up too. I would avoid putting screws or bolts on every corner, especially when the concept doesn't call for it. The handles on your box aren't made like handles, and are pretty different to the concept as well.
  • Sanches
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    Sanches polycounter lvl 8
    Hello there. Thanks for  a comment @Ashervisalis.
    Ashervisalis said:
    I think you've made your bevels on your first box too large. 
    You mean this?

    You're also missing key features, such as the box being made out of one mesh, and not being able to be opened. In the concept art, there is a view of the box open, and it would be cool as hell if your box could open up too. 
    No i didn't . :smiley:  Just trying to make very simple stuff for now. 
    Ashervisalis said:
    I would avoid putting screws or bolts on every corner, especially when the concept doesn't call for it. The handles on your box aren't made like handles, and are pretty different to the concept as well.
    Thanks. I'll keep it on mind.
    Progress on high poly


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