Need any feedback

fullpinkdog

Hi, trying to practice in creating modular assets, any feedback would be very helpful
Refrence from https://www.artstation.com/artwork/voOO6 . Really cool works
Maya-->Zbrush-->SP-->UE4
16,5k tris
Final render:

All assets in one 4k texture, 5.12px/unit:

assets:

Ashervisalis

Any chance I could see an up close render of those pipes? Really cool job. Also, pretty awesome how well you made it look with just one 4k texture.

Benjammin

I like your color palette and overall shapes. I feel like the flat pieces on the wall sections are a little too flat - there's not much there to draw the eye. Also, I think the grunge in your texture could do with some tweaking; it always pays to think about the story behind a surface, and what sort of wear its received. 

fullpinkdog

Ashervisalis said:

Any chance I could see an up close render of those pipes?

Yeah, sure:

It's some kind of "leather bag" with metal
Anyway, thanks for feedback

fullpinkdog

Benjammin said:

I feel like the flat pieces on the wall sections are a little too flat - there's not much there to draw the eye. Also, I think the grunge in your texture could do with some tweaking; it always pays to think about the story behind a surface, and what sort of wear its received. 

Really good feedback, man
I dont really thought about the story, hmm