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Mouse in hood

I recently made this mouse. I'm not the best with high poly or fur, but I wanted to give it a go. 
Looking for feedback.

Blender 2.8
Gimp 2.8

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  • Alex_J
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    Alex_J grand marshal polycounter
    yes!

     inspired by Ghost of  a Tale? I love that game. 

    The area where the lips meet under the nose has some weird lines. Like it's snarling a little or something? Looks a little sloppy right there. 

    Inside the ears could use a little dettailing. Like just the hint of some shape in there may be nice. Maybe some furs sticking up would be a fun look as well. Also it looks like we can see that the ear is just clipping through the hood? Is there an actual hole?

    Teeth look a bit like George Washingtons wooden teeth because of those vertical lines. I think they are too big and too deep.

    I like the colors, but it may be fun to play with giving a little blob of contrasting colors here or there, like at the eyebrows or chin or cheeks -- just see what it does for the character. 
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