Looking for portfolio feedback. Any thoughts / critiques much appreciated!

tyler_siemers

I am a fairly recent university graduate looking for a portfolio critique. I'm always seeking to improve, and would one day love to make my way into the industry. Thanks! https://tyler_siemers.artstation.com/projects

Kainkun

I can't say much since you're ahead of me in skill but I noticed in your page with the Flail has a broken link 

tyler_siemers

Kainkun said:

I can't say much since you're ahead of me in skill but I noticed in your page with the Flail has a broken link 

Thank you! I have fixed this issue and the model should be viewable now.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Portfolio is strong to me for a beginner.

Weakest piece to me is the fountain, but that's just coming from an attractive assessment compared to a BAD ASS AXE.

tyler_siemers

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Portfolio is strong to me for a beginner.

Weakest piece to me is the fountain, but that's just coming from an attractive assessment compared to a BAD ASS AXE.

Thanks for the feedback! As I work more on my portfolio, I think I will be phasing that piece out. I think I've grown as an artist and it does not represent my current skills.

Brian "Panda" Choi

You could probably repurpose it by giving it a more compelling statue on/in the fountain. Or use it to express your VFX skills: water spout, splashing, etc.  All environment art related.