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My latest Environment scene

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My latest scene was created for the CGMA course - VEGETATION & PLANTS FOR GAMES by Jeremy Huxley.
Was extremely challenging but very fun!

Artstation - https://www.artstation.com/artwork/xzdzyW

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  • Esuka
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    Esuka polycounter lvl 8
    Nice work, I really appreciate the detail of your set pieces. The trees and grass clumps in particular look very fine. The ferns are not bad, but a couple of them look perhaps a bit low resolution by comparison. I don't think this is a huge issue.

    The main issue I have is the focal point. I imagine it is supposed to be the campfire in the center of the clearing, but my eye is drawn to the lit area in the upper center of the image. I think the main thing to work on, either on this piece or moving forward, is controlling the lighting and value to direct the viewer where you want them to look.

    Also, one final nitpick. There's a tree sitting on top of a boulder that doesn't look grounded. I think a couple roots are sticking out into the air. A couple winding roots to help plant it on the boulder, or a placement behind, would solve that. I hope this has been helpful, and keep it up!
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