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pascalie
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pascalie polycounter lvl 2
Hello guys please i need you opinon and critique on this shot
thanks for support

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  • BrandonBerryCG
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    BrandonBerryCG polycounter lvl 6

    I like the shot's mix between realism and stylized animation. The main thing that sticks out to me is the varying kickback of the gun. One shot's recoil will slide him backwards a couple feet while another barely affects the body. While I'm no expert, I feel that the kickback should not only rotate the hands up but translate towards the body.

    Also when he slides into the second guy, its a bit unclear how he collides and there seems to be some clipping.

    Great work though! I hope I was able to help!

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